15
Nov
07

The Walk Talks

Rohit woke up after a marathon sleep of sixteen hours. He needed to smoke. He got up from the bed, pulled out a sweat shirt, put it on, had a quick splash of water on his rugged face and moved out of his apartment, into the street.
The panwala shop, which was the destination, was about two hundred metres and one red light away. He started walking. He had nothing to think about, or that was what he preferred to do while walking. Only the things that formed the present, provided by his eyes and ears, were allowed to have a place in his brain RAM. So what was there now? The clumsy yellow coloured house on his left, a blue van on the road to his right, a black coloured motorcycle on the same road, a couple of kids in school uniform and with heavy school bags walking in his front and a distant traffic policemen on the red light. That was quite a long list of characters. Although the road had loads of other vehicles honking and moving but there is so much that two eyes can see and shortlist, and about the honking vehicles, in the fight of eyes and ears, the usual winner is the pair of eyes only.
He started thinking as he was walking with these characters to play with. ‘What if these kids turn around, face me and start dancing on Beedi Jalaai Le in perfect Bipasha Basu style? And the traffic policeman comes running from the red light, watches the dance, pulls out a ten rupee note, waves it over the kids’ heads and gives it to them. And the car pulls on the reverse gear and crashes into the bike, the biker is jumped out of his seat and falls on the roof of the car and starts clapping for the kids’ performance.’
The scene looked brilliant but there was not the usual smile on Rohit’s face which used to come after the complete picture in mind. Something was missing. Was he able to find out the missing link? ‘Villain! There is no villain in the story at the moment.’ But he could not think of one. He kept walking. He almost reached the redlight to cross the road behind the school kids. They were still dancing in his head.
The kids turned around. The car stopped, so did the bike. The carwala came out, the biker put the bike on a side stand. All of them pulled out something from their bags or their pockets.
They had pistols in their hands. They all frowned simultaneously and shot 2 bullets each.
Someone from the clumsy house put a bucket of water on Rohit’s body.
The End.


7 Responses to “The Walk Talks”


  1. November 15, 2007 at 2:50 pm

    SO who is the villain? the bike wallah ? carwallah? or road ?????

    Nice twist reminds me of O Henry: all ur posts begin in a psychedelic mood ( m i wrong) ?

  2. 2 mistakenidentity
    November 15, 2007 at 3:07 pm

    A plot familiar to most of the lazy fellow IITians… i myself felt being shot at the [i]ber sarai[/i] red light.

    The obvious search for the last moment turn of events… a twist in the story and “bhum” comes a splash of water. Quite a vivid, hair-raising description i must say…

  3. November 15, 2007 at 3:26 pm

    yaar galti ho gayi…shud have read it after getting high. Aur bucket agar goli marne se pehle giri hoti,wud had been a perfect example of ‘kambal pitayi’..cant stop laughing imagining the situation where someone drops a bucket over your head and villains shoot you…hahahaha

  4. 4 Ishaan
    November 15, 2007 at 4:47 pm

    Yaar I am new to reading blogs to I am to just trying to figure out ki tu kuch kuch zheezon ki itni precise specifications deta hai kya yeh bas writing style hai ya kuch funda hai????
    16 hrs, kuch cheezon ke colors, 2 BULLETS each???
    Might seem really foolish but yahi dimag mein aya…:P

    Yaar ek aur baat sala jab bhi bucket of water ka reference ata hai to dream thi aisa hi kyun lagta hai?? House to wahi scene mein tha aur neend khuli aisa bhi nahi likha tune…fir bhi pehli baar padhke to aisa laga :khul gayi neend, sapna tha yeh to!!!???

  5. 5 :)
    November 15, 2007 at 4:56 pm

    rohit khud villain hai kya?

    @ishaan – i completely agree with u

  6. November 15, 2007 at 5:51 pm

    Todu comments..:) One piece of writing and so many interpretations. I really enjoyed this post.

    @Nikhil
    Who is the villain? That is for you to answer yourself. Can be Rohit, can be the kids, can be the carwala, can be you!
    N O Henry thoda zyada ho gaya..O Harry hi theek hain hum :D

    @mistakenidentity
    Thanks for sharing this piece of information. Would be lovely to talk about when we catch up for a beer..Kitni baari Ber Sarai par shaheed hua hai tu :D

    @tarun
    Kya hasaya be!! Mazaa aa gaya. In your case, it would have been, Kiye karaye par pani fenk kar goli marna :D

    @Ishaan
    The most thoughtful comment. But I won’t like to comment. The details have some meaning, which I won’t talk about and would leave you to make sense of them. But its not foolish for sure.
    About the dream part, anything can be a dream. For all you know, you might be reading this thing in a dream only. How is that?

    @:)
    Maa ka doodh piya hai toh saamne aa! :D
    We don’t really welcome anonymous people here.
    Poor Ishaan doesn’t even know who in the world is agreeing with him :P

  7. November 21, 2007 at 12:38 pm

    Thats what i always say..sutta kills!


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